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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Do you know how much I savor the fruit of your pen am subdued, mind reeling, when I let those words in? I am astonished to find myself so careless in matters of my will (where you are concerned) Even so, I will not surrender, hopeless this strong desire that you turn one solitary thought to me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, Robert, now that she will know of your desire, she will grant you that thought, maybe two! Good luck! Lovely! Margherita  |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I like this. (I know that taste.) Thanks. s.a.g. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Something tells me that your "Orchard" is going to be bearing some fruit very soon!   EA |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Robert ........... a single thought. My, that IS romantic. Gently said. Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
go ahead and be careless sounds like it's good for you and her  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... and hope she spares you far more than a solitary thought! *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It IS amazing...when we really LISTEN to the poet's words...and let them sink in, smothering us... Well done, Sir... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is very well done. I hope it does for you that which you wish. If not, write some more; oh hell, write some more anyway! *smile* |
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