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Prayerfully stricken
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Prayerfully stricken |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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offers of peace on the table are scraped into reasons not to offers of love leave with the justification of injury’s prior rectifying prayerful poverty is simply excused into extinction piles of selfishness obstruct sight an empty plate makes for a gut retching if not for Grace and Mercy provided in profusion starvation would not seem much incentive [This message has been edited by jellybeans (08-19-2003 02:22 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful! And true! Great poem. Love, Margherita |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so very truthful. Great poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you both, this one is not much to look at, but if you are sitting at the table, you know just what I mean....thank you again |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyGirl~ I began to copy the parts that touched me tenderly ... when I looked ... here's what I found - 'offers of peace on the table are scraped into reasons not to offers of love leave with the justification of injury’s prior rectifying prayerful poverty is simply excused into extinction piles of selfishness obstruct sight an empty plate makes for a gut retching if not for Grace and Mercy provided in profusion starvation would not seem much incentive' You are a remarkable poet person~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jellybeans I've got to agree with Marge...your poetry and you are very special.  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
JB...honest words spoken in truth! You know I love your work...don't you? Patricia |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you 3 so much, I couldn't be more pleased nor more complimented by more lovely ladies.....sigh...thank you again |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, JB, for the invitation to sit at your table... there is much to be grateful for... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very powerful words, articulated and exact...this was a wonderful read...thank you |
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