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Incomplete Thoughts |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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With cap on, shake well before use Or else you might misuse Ground pepper treated to reduce bacteria This life we leave is trifling Patent Trademark Restricted Wood chair with leather covering Carbon fiber in my dashboard Under the oak tree Will we always be? Elegant princess Come to your senses Castles in the sky Just beyond my eye Let bygones be bygones And get on Flashlights in the dark Fading out of focus To reduce risk Read instructions Where are my instructions? "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Love it!  specially this part: Elegant princess Come to your senses Castles in the sky Just beyond my eye If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Ain't it a shame . . . no instructions. But I'd probably build it inside-out if I had 'em. Cute. s.a.g. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Often times it's the instructions that confuse us in the first place. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
When all else fails....but by then, I threw them away. Sigh. I like this poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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