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Gwenhwyfar
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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 lost within enchantment gazing deep within the future my soul ten paces behind running backwards within a tangled web of the past Arthur I am forever cursed... without your love who am I... I once was your Gwenhwyfar Now... I am plagued fruitless in my desire meandering aimlessly amongst the Isle of Avalon caught somewhere in between the mists and the past Arthur, who am I... for no longer do I feel as if I am still your Gwenhwyfar If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-18-2003 03:05 PM).] |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Boy, a guy has got to be pretty good to be the definition of someone else. I fear I'd fail that test. Hope the mists clear for you . . . S Arthur Grey |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a special talent for writing this kind of poetry! I get swept away into another time...   Linda |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Beautifully done. I like the description intermixed with the monologue. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Maybe you are a reincarnation of some of these heroins? You do these beautifully! Love, Margherita  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
giiiirl. this is beyoootiful. how is it possible that we hang on to our old roles, as if we're still somebodys somebody, when were not anymore. keeping this beauty! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ceinwyn, I do so enjoy your writings....and you always, always touch upon the mystical... and for that? I thank you. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 Sunshine.. no thank you & yw... gem... right on!  Margherita... thank you and perhaps maybe Pilgrimage... thanks Linda... thanks..always a pleasure to hear from you S Arthur Grey... let's say one must have high expectations no!? lol.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris, just today I was at the library searching for history - you inspired me to read of this and what you have written . . . is absolute perfection. Her despair, pain and utter search for destiny gone astray is beauty . . . through your words, she breathes . . . still I adore this, you are an astounding writer xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sue dahling you snuck up on me!! I wrote this for you & for the sake of my muse..cos well I was thinking about writing about her today and you happened to mention her I took that as a sign that she was ready to come out and breathe again.. KISSEEEY FACE  lol... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris . . . thank you . . . weird we were thinking about her at the same time you need no inspiring . . . *smile* xxoo |
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