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SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

0 posted 2003-08-18 02:47 AM

Cid
Eyes speaking truths of long forgotten lore,
through the dark ravine you wished would never be,
the parallax opens to the soothful songs of morning held deep within,
while dancing to the tunes of insignifigance,
the meaning is lost only on those who are lost.

Ponder this while I walk the shoulder of a divergent highway,
adamantly persuing a chimera
which slips disconsolately through ones grasp
as water weeps from a cupped hand,
denying the bearer reparation
for it's egression.

A beau ideal figurine emerges from the dark
bearing promises of nothing, bejewled with uncertainty
As a bemused witness to subtle amaranthine
one can see how infinity's indwelling
tarnishes its perfection.

Being impelled past the undergrowth,
to a rivulet in the sacred land of ancestry,
eyes towards the heavens, soaking in soul
annexing mana.
I'll write more. I'm just curious as to your opinions.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-08-18 09:43 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Ryan - This is an interesting piece and a fine entree to our forums. I'll be interested to read more of your work...

Check your email for a special greeting...

SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

2 posted 2003-08-18 01:25 PM

I appreciate the welcome. I'm none to confident in my writing skills, but I'll do the best that I can. Thanks!

Ryan

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2003-08-19 10:29 PM

Mass insanity (thought that struck me when I read this).

I like.

ow.. brain clot.

I am sooo one for the extensive replies...

I'm on page 40 of THGTTG.

see ya later.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-08-20 08:59 AM

Yes, Ryan, enjoy Passions, and write more...Welcome aboard. I feel it's going to be OUR pleasure reading your works.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-08-20 09:11 AM

Lovely write, Ryan. Enjoyed it much.

Welcome to PIP, sir, looking forward to more

SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

6 posted 2003-08-20 02:48 PM

Allysa- Thank you for a moderately warm reply... I think?

Sunshine- Its alot to live up to to make my writing your pleasure, but I'll give my best. Thank you

Karou- I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

I appreciate an accepting response from exceptional writers.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

7 posted 2003-08-20 03:18 PM

*tosses her pen away* sorry I have missed this..shame on me for being away...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2003-08-21 10:16 PM

crazy crazy boy...

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-08-21 10:22 PM

Welcome to Passion's.You will be a wonderful addition to our family and a pleasure to read

Crystal

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

10 posted 2003-08-21 10:29 PM

Welcome! Such an awesome piece to come to us with! Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-08-26 11:22 PM

(smiles) Wow! I truly enjoyed this, dearest friend, I understand too that the water must sift through our fingers so nature can makes its course, yet we need a little of a wash every now and then as to be one with the ravine is being one with the holy and live with this health we value! (sigh) This is a great debut! Welcome to Passions, dearest friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!