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Dear Moca...( a letter to my girlfriend)
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Dear Moca...( a letter to my girlfriend) |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Dear Moca, In writing this letter I hope to suspend, if only briefly, the borders that separate my deepest heart from my tongue. I wish to only speak with a truth that justifies the fire that burns with the thought of you. May my words be true to this vision. My fingers knew of this love before my mind. My heart spoke in whispers of a touch. Yet still I would roll my fingers in a fist…unsure of messages that spoke such subtle ways. The whispers soon grew in voice and urgency. The fingers knew…and wanted. They ached for the taste of your skin. My ears followed the hearts direction. Your voice became music. There is still none sweeter. In dreams I dance to the softness of your song. In the morning…I smile as the tune plays on. My eyes grew hungry. Your every move tempted for a feast. I devoured you with every glance…and grew hungrier by the day. My body worked against me. It knew of things my mind couldn’t grasp. So I followed my fingers to the welcome of your flesh. I listened to the singing of my dreams. I let my eyes feed me of your beauty. And I have never doubted the wisdom of my body again. I love you, Eric ( Hi everyone...please forgive this letter...she has been gone a week and I wish to surprise her. Thanks!) [This message has been edited by Ericc (08-17-2003 08:08 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...WOW!!!.... Moca is one very lucky lady!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this brought a tear to my eye because though I've never actually had a girl, I dream of my mystery dream girl all the time and know how just missing someone for a short time can touch your heart and I know she will be happy to read this to show that you care and still love her as always and she'll just tear up happily and give you a sweet kiss! (big hugggsssssss) This is golden, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG what are you asking for forgiveness for? This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen . . . She will adore it Eric You are so sweet xxoo |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I think you suspended the borders just fine...whew!!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
what a sweet romantic man !!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If she is smart, she'll hurry back! She needs to feed you with her lovin'! Can't let a man get too hungry!  She's going to love this love letter!--and I won't tell her that I read it first! lol Happy reunion! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Eric, I'm so glad that you put this wonderful love letter for all of us to see. I just knew that you had to be in love to write such beautiful love poems. Now I know for sure. This is right from your heart and she is going to love it, Eric. Hey, if Gary had a computer with him, ya'll would see more of our love than you see now from my poems. LOL He writes a lot to me the way that you did this to your girlfriend. Hugs to you both  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-18-2003 01:43 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like she has you missing her...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Thank you guys! Love, Eric |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Wow. I remember this depth of love, and I miss it. I very much enjoyed this for the source of some of your inspirational, and always deep writes. She inspires all this? she is a wonderful lady, and a lucky one! much love, gem xxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Good Lord!! Psst..if you two every break-up.. Susan |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I think she's got ya where she wants ya! And how nice for you! s.a.g. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your passionate letter is no doubt a perfect and sweet prelude to upcoming fireworks! You proved that “separation” can be highly inspiring. Happy reunion! Love, Margherita  |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I'm back... and how beautiful this letter is! We are blessed with this beautiful love we share, and no matter the distance (even 4000 miles), we are always together... we are truly One. Thank you for this wonderful, love-filled surprise; thank you for your passion, your love, your sweetness... for you. I love you... Moca |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc You are both lucky to have this love, and you write it so well! |
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