Open Poetry #28 |
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A Question In The Shadows As The Day Waits For Dawn |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
Did you ever ring a chapel bell then stand aside and wonder is it ever heard in hell? Did you ever ring a chapel bell? The damned will never tell if they hear its muffled thunder; did you ever ring a chapel bell, then stand aside and wonder? ©2003 by icebox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no, but I hear them often in this small town..and love the sound... *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I too love the sound of the church bells.. but have never rung them myself. Good thoughts to ponder. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox.....I have rung the bell in the campanile at UC Berkeley...and I only know how much the sound meant to me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have never had the privilege of ringing church bells, but I have been very near to them when they have been ringing. I could feel the reverberations in my chest and it was a thrilling experience. It was as if God was imparting his energizing vibrations into the very core of my soul. I imagine that if I were to be with the bats in the belfry, they would be deafening--but pure ecstasy! ![]() Besides the poem, I enjoyed the poem of the title! lol ![]() ![]() EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent write, i'm not sure they can hear anything over all the chatter of priests and lawyers down there [This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-17-2003 10:45 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lol@Raph nope icebox, never rang the bell...maybe next year |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Wow. Wow. I love this. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice ![]() |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Well penned. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..icebox../\..your poem is quite lyric; i enjoyed it much.. ../\..Spiros ---------------calm---------- |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I've heard the beels ring many times.AHhhh you've got me thinking agai ![]() Crystal |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Perhaps the bell in this poem Might be thought of As a metaphor for a voice, Pealed out Into a firestorm of impulsive actions, And opinions? * After reading this poem And rereading it again, I stood aside and wondered. *************************** enjoyed the poem.....ice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I wonder if some on this earth enjoy the sound of the chapel bell...if not, they would not appreciate the sound in hell...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The sound of Chapel bells are beautiful to me...or at least they were until Princess Di's death...anyway..I let my mind wonder off.. Made me think...so much thinking to do and not enough coffee.. Most enjoyed Icy! Susan |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Iceman, this is a triolet. Very good, Sir. No, I never have rang a Chapel bell, but I sure have heard a lot of them. Now, if people in hell will hear them? I doubt it. Hugs to you ![]() Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Didn't wonder 'till now.. |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
hmmmm......doubt it, but good though :-p Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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