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life in concentric circles
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life in concentric circles |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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a stone's throw into the ocean have the ripples stopped or have they merely grown too wide to see from this tired and grounded perspective? [This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-17-2003 05:36 PM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Cool title, Raph, and I like the ponder... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You DO get me thinking... I started out thinking, what would it matter either way... then I started arguing with m'self, thinking about the "butterfly effect" and weather... then I found this site that disputed that... (http://www.abc.net.au/science/k2/moments/s436385.htm) and then... smile... see? concentric circle thinking.  |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
somebody failed quantum  -majnu |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Mark appreciate it Grins Thanks K, it disputes but doesn't outright disprove wink lol Stephen Hawkins i ain't grins |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
from this view, i think it's a bit of both,depending on the day |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Another phenominal write from one of the most talented writes on this site. Everything summed up in 4 lines... awesome. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you climb to the crest of a spiritual mountain, you will be able to see the circles expanding into forever...   EA |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ohh..this reminded me of the chaos effect...you know me  but anyways: A butterfly takes flight and flutters its wings. the movement gets bigger and bigger until it turns into a hurricane..or something. But it makes you wonder if something that small can really cause something so big. whatever  See look- you got me going again. or see look? now I just read ser's reply. Great minds think alike. heh insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (08-17-2003 10:09 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this is funny because I was thinking this very thing, even wrote about it - while I was skipping stones across a creek . . . I could see the circles . . . all I did was watch them expand from the shore . . . Awesome write Raph xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks mish, i'd like to think i haven't seen the end of them but that in the bigger picture there's still more to this Ringo very kind of you to say thanks Linda thanks made me smile thats what im hoping Hey Liz thanks always nice to see you about oops snuck in while i was replying, thanks Sue did you post it? maybe thats what set this off it was an image I couldnt get out of my head and seemingly out of nowhere [This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-17-2003 10:22 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
not here, in Sanctuary . . . weird yw no, you havent seen it |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Yay Raph |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Great write ! I now know what you were telling me. this kinda goes with what we were talking about, dont write because you want to write write because you need to little things in life are the best material for poetry, but not many people notice them. you do and that is a gift! keep using it |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
...and if you hang around long enough, they come back....sort-of.... I like this. You always see things in a new light, show them in a new way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everybody much appreciated |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
they go on and on till they tenderly touch the shores...h |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raph~ The beauty of life is found within the circling~ concentric ... one of my favorite words~ Just so lovely are your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Everything is now . . . Throw another stone. [This message has been edited by wandering glider (08-27-2003 07:12 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
And I continue to learn from reading your awesome writing.Great job, I learn every time I read you. Jason |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
mmmmmm... a trickle down effect. Well penned. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
excellent Raph |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Raph, you are one poet whose writing must be read more than once....talk about a "ripple effect"....thoughts grow wider each time a piece of yours is read !!! Awesome. Chris |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your words ripple into the minds of many.It is a great joy to read your work Crystal |
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