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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-08-17 03:55 PM


The strings bleed the blues
do you play guitar Jimi
or does it play you?

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (08-17-2003 05:35 PM).]

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-08-17 04:10 PM


Well, almost... (2nd line)
But I'm learning first hand how infinitely versatile and emotive the guitar can be.  As for Jimi -- haven't heard enough of him but the hits...

-MVS

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Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-08-17 04:21 PM


Damn Raph,
this is realllllll good.



Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-08-17 04:32 PM


Thanks for catching that Mark..damn i've written enough to know..rewrote the words to the line and left in the the..

Thanks Meg I l@ve Jimi..(6)

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littlewing
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4 posted 2003-08-17 05:20 PM


. . . music oh music, I wish I could caress . . .  caress . . .

I don't think he minded . . .
she . . . it is a she
*smile*
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-17-2003 05:23 PM).]

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-08-17 05:35 PM


she was she was
Kaoru
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6 posted 2003-09-07 06:43 PM


This is one of the poems you've written that's stuck with me forever.. I'm bumping it.
angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-09-07 06:46 PM


This was very intriguing.I enjoyed it.
Crystal

gemjop
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8 posted 2003-09-07 08:17 PM


glad meg bumped, i've never read this.

bit of both i'd say.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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9 posted 2003-09-07 08:52 PM


wow..you are..amazing..this is..wow.. and thanks for the interesting...um..yeah..the thing..

do you just look for that stuff when you are bored?lol...
82%...83%

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Local Rebel
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10 posted 2003-09-07 11:49 PM


Somewhere a Queen is weeping,
somewhere a King has no wife.

And the wind it cries Mary.

And if I don't meet you no more in this world
Then I'll, I'll meet you in the next one
And don't be late, don't be late

yeah
voodoo dood

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-09-08 02:11 AM



Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-09-08 03:57 PM


Thanks for the bump Meg

Thanks Crystal glad you did

Thanks gem gah i love the man

Thanks liz sorry it didn't work maybe its a setting on your computer?

I said fly on sweet Rebel...

Mmmmm...bouncy...thanks dixie grins


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