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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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perched on a telephone wire words in grasp of talon's keep two birds chirp in chattering-- why don't we just shut up and sing? laughing language lost two birds carry messages two birds captured breeze in wing freed of all our quarreling-- how I envy them their flight. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If I were to consider the consideration, then should I consider the consequences or just soar until I find a new wire to consider perching on? ... which would then lead to considering the consideration of the consequences all over again. To think that I always thought it was a simple thing called life, now I am not so sure, but hey, life is life and I will live it. Wonderful to read your words and as always, your words leave me wanting more. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
me 2 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
MARK!!!hey you!  it's WONDERFUL to see you! and your reply is EXACTLY what I meant...it just gets SO complicated when we try to rationalize it, huh? laughing now. Now post something, will ya? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oooops... I got excited and missed ya Raph. hugs to you. and yep, I knew you'd understand.  |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice enjoyed Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
When chickens quit quarrelling over their food they often find that there is enough for all of them. I wonder if it might not be the same with the human race. -- Don Marquis *flying off my wire  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
foxy? Thank you for reading... and REB??? Don Marquis wrote my ANTHEM! (the lesson of the moth) and btw. Nice flight pattern.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Never knew old Luke was a druid! To chatter or sing about it, 'ey? It is like the line from an old movie: "You gonna talk? Talk. You gonna shoot? Shoot!" I loked this poem a lot. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Birds that sing and fly together--stay together...   EA |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Precisely, Serenity. Well said, and well written! ~Tier |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Come vis me to ze cazbaahh, we vill find our own skies! I'll share my wire wit'cha anyday girlie.(maybe if I follow you around the forums, some of your talent will rub off on me?)  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
to be of their world if just for one day take leave from humanity and just fly away.................. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...same here... regards sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I envy them also..nice one Karen..and look you even brought out Mark M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Some days I just sit back and watch everyone else clawing and spitting at each other...thinking they will achieve something......and I laugh at their stupidity.. Then, other days I am the one hissing and clawing at them to stay away from my corner... *sigh* I am only human I guess... I loved this Karen. Susan C. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"why don't we just shut up and sing?" and... "how I envy them their flight" Yes...and how I envy you your mind...you never cease to cause me to 'think'...thank you for that. Love you, lady... "My friends are my estate." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - it would be quite the dream . . . to fly . . . *smile* xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a beautiful wistful hope wishes come true |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Twa Corbies! Hmmmm... I like Marks' considerations, considering.... Lovely write m'witch ~yeti |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You will never know how well you spoke my thoughts today. Great write. TD |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity... A different side of you exposed with this piece. Enjoyed the lesson with in your words. Live life simply the hard things will be taken care of...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-07-2003 01:33 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I enjoyed this.Your writes always make me think.A lesson is learned here.Nicely done. angelblueyes |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
two birds chirp in chattering-- why don't we just shut up and sing? Yep, Karen, you got it. Wanna sing??  Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel  (you teaching me the soft shoe as we go along singing) |
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