Open Poetry #27 |
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Productive Insomnia |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
J$J Cafe If I should win the jackpot today I’ll go and buy my own cafe Name it after JSJ And turn the S into the sign of money The J$J Cafe is blue With pretty lights of every hue The bar is stocked with micro brew The finest wines, dontcha’ know, and whiskey Joel is cookin’ up hot tamales Salsa, rice, and spicy frijoles The chef he hired is scrubbin’ the toidies You toe the line or you pay for it, buddy Sarah connects the cords for the band Crawls around amps and microphone stands She’s got her eye on the geetar man Plant never sounded so good, did he honey Joseph has got ‘em packed in the bar Everyone wants to follow the star He’s singin’ a riddle straight from his heart Ain’t no way outa here, but nobody’s running So please bet a buck on the lottery And help me invest in my wildest dream You’ll all be invited to the very first party Making J$J a total reality And to my loved ones, S & J I hope and pray that you will say “You won the lotto? We did too When you’re ready, we’ll go with you” |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() enjoyed this very original write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Joseph has got ‘em packed in the bar Everyone wants to follow the star He’s singin’ a riddle straight from his heart Ain’t no way outa here, but nobody’s running Sounds like a nice place to party down! What a great poem Kahlil~ Honest and truly, I loved it all! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
many good wishes sent your way, positive write...go for it.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sounds like a place I would enjoy...good luck! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ok, thanks, you're all invited as soon as I buy the winner! (what if it happened anyway out of determination...there's a thought) |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I really want to run this place. Got any suggestions? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
This was so cute..lol sorry to say "cute" but it is! I could see everything happening as you described it...and once this opens,which it will!,I'll be there too, I need somehwere new to go on friday nights hehe loved this write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Talia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dream it, visualize it and manifest it into reality! I can see it now!---the J$J Cafe! Looks good!--and it's packed with patrons! ![]() Here's to making it into a happening thing! EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you, Talia, we'll be needing a bass guitar player, for sure.... Thank you Earth Angel, I think you're right, visualize first, the rest will come! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Winning the jackpot would be nice!~ ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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