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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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This rain becomes redundant. Lamentations of star-crossed lovers are drowning April's flowerfields. Summer slithers in as Spring slips away; a broken promise. In between downfalls, golden glimpses peek thru, separating streams of puddles into colorful shattered mirrors. Waterfalls run haphazardly. Rainbows swirl on blackboard lawns. Aching to feel the breath of summer, i can only wrap myself in the current view. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-22-2003 05:52 PM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Yes spring was like a broken promise this year -- your imagery makes the current view easy on the eyes!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
why thank you......and ditto to u  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lamentations of star-crossed lovers are drowning April's flowerfields. Oh me....but it is lovely a midst the rainbow swirl!! Temptation is what it is, makes my head hurt from beating it against the wall. hugs girlie~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good poem, very much enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... you paint the image well.... I enjoyed... now... here is to hoping you get a break from rain..without the 90 degrees and humidity that turns the world into a steam bath... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This rain becomes redundant. Lamentations of star-crossed lovers are drowning April's flowerfields...." Lovely Write Dear Inked ARCTIC WIND |
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