Open Poetry #27 |
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a crush |
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daniel_martin Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 30london |
um, yeah. ![]() ![]() ![]() My thoughts record the footage of my dreams and so each night I find I dream of you. Stapled eyes stare more boldly than in day, Thus a lunar epilogue seals itself upon my hopes, when we kiss the morning in. |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
An enjoyable "love story" write! I especially like: Thus a lunar epilogue seals itself upon my hopes, when we kiss the morning in. "When we kiss the morning in." Such a touch! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'kiss the morning in' enjoyed the imagery |
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daniel_martin Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 30london |
it's been said of this, "pretty, but that's all" i'm beginning to agree. ![]() cheers for the feed back guys. danny |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good writing, I enjoyed the read, the last line said it all |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
![]() Nice Write ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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