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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-22 03:18 AM


I sit here,
only in my thoughts, innocent,
I swear!
..He comes in and grabs me by
the hair, then..
throws me into my dining room.
And there sits, the one I live with,
tellin' me I have to smoke
outside.

I know I was angered, quite..
I left to the hallway which was
only lit by flickering lights..

Walk downstairs tell,
the woman by the door that
I'm waiting for a friend to pick me up..
( the friend wasn't him nor the one I live with)
I smoked a cigarette..
it was raining, I was ..
crawling back up the steps
where morbid heads were
rolling..and speaking

in gibberish..



© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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1 posted 2003-06-22 03:21 AM


..this is fascinating...what does it mean to you?
JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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2 posted 2003-06-22 07:06 AM


Well written, yet partially mystifying.

Appears to describe an unhappy experience.

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-08-05 07:25 PM


Emotion-Filled Write!


ARCTIC WIND

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