Open Poetry #27 |
Swan Song (repost) |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
You are the forbidden swan who has swum into my lake the waters of my life which once held waves of turmoil now remain still and calm in your presence as your wings glide on the water I feel you beauty touch my intermost being and wish for a love that can never be for you are the graceful swan so beautiful your form so perfect your movement on the water that at times I forget everything my problems worries and start to enter the water to swim to you then I see my reflection and retreat into the solitude of loneliness for you are too beautiful for me and if the most gallant swan is unworthy then what of me for I am just a lonely creature hiding in the darkness so scold me not for loving you from my shadow for it is all I can in a love never ment to be and where there is no tommorow. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
so scold me not for loving you from my shadow for it is all I can in a love never ment to be damn brad this hurt...got me thinking..damn thinking bad..but hey youre writing good..me try sleepy now..sigh |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is never a tomorrow good write, but it hurt |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah you choose the swan to speak of beauty ... and indeed ... wow. This is a wonderful poem, even though a sad one ..... don't give up, trust! Love needs courage! Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Such a beautiful write...simply beautiful. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Brad...don't you know you have to swim in order to get anywhere? Loved it, now paddle! Susan |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
sigh....who wants to be a swan anyway? i'd rather be a duck. this, m friend is beyooootiful. and worthy of a tear. much love, gem xx |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You are the forbidden swan who has swum into my lake the waters of my life which once held waves of turmoil........" Nice write, Have ya heard me sing, It ain't pretty lalalalala! ARCTIC WIND |
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