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Open Poetry #27
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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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0 posted 2003-06-22 01:33 AM


the wind blows
the trees bow
the birds sing their sweet song of sorrow
the rain pours
mother nature is crying
crying from all the pain we cause her
the sun burns
like a hot fire
it all surrounds us
the world lives....

authors note:i didnt like this one, but i guess its ok...

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-22 04:43 AM


I like it, it's pretty neat
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-06-24 04:42 PM


enjoyed,,,
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2009-01-23 02:07 PM


Enjoyed the Write!


ARCTIC WIND

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