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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-12 10:42 AM

something i wrote not sure if its anygood but i liked it anyway thanks for taking the time to read it if you read it.
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down in the garden of love
Where angels stray
From the heavens above

Birds sing their soothing tunes
As lovers walk hand in hand
Along the garden paths of love

The sun soon fades
As night invades
The garden life of love

Under moonlit trees
The lovers are pleased
As there share a kiss of love

Their souls soon merge
As hearts emerge
In the garden of love

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-06-12 10:56 AM

How could anyone not enjoy your poetic vision of a garden of love?

Warm hugs,
EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-12 12:26 PM

Beautiful Lee . . .
sound like Eden to me . . .

amzing job - *smiling*
glad to see you here . . .
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-12 12:42 PM

very good write!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-06-12 03:40 PM

I really liked the vision that you created in my mind through your words, a beautiful garden grows inside your heart!Lovely poem!
ps..Glad you took the time to post it..Redstone..

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-12-2003 03:41 PM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2003-06-12 08:32 PM

I loved it! Nice job and I walked this path of your words.

Hugs ...

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-06-12 08:47 PM

Very nicely penned and much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

7 posted 2003-06-12 09:21 PM

Amazing job! I loved the visuals.....Wish I was in this poem! LOL Great job. Can`t wait to see more of your work!
*Allison*

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2003-06-13 04:21 AM

I had to come back for a second serving!
I love every word of this poem!

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

9 posted 2003-06-13 08:53 AM

Thanks for all the replys Glad you all liked it i promise i will check each of your poems out and tell you what i like about them

hope you lot read my new poems when i write them too lol

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-06-14 09:00 AM

Yes, yes very nice...where is this garden located...James

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

11 posted 2003-06-14 09:01 AM

you got to use your mind to travel to the garden of love......lol

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-02-01 09:23 PM

Lovely, get it lol

ARCTIC WIND

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