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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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When I was a child I had a dream that one day I would fly I did not realize then that dreams drift like the silent breeze the golden seas tranquility on my knees wings wrapped around me |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"on my knees wings wrapped around me" Too, too sad an image. Wings aren't meant to deflect sharp winds. They're meant to slice them! A pretty write here, Susie! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I'm going to have to request a graphic for that image, Sue. It's forever YOU in my mind, now.  |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
awesome! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this aches..but sweetly..make any sense..no i know i don't..aaaack |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch, this hurts...you need help up from your knees? wings weren't made for blankets |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
or are they protecting you? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah dear Sue such a heartbreaking image ... so beautifully written. Hugs. Let the wings warm by the sun and fly ... Margherita  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I know this...my wings have been wrapped around me for many years. With some changes in my life, I am learning to stand and feel strength in my wings. I hold the hope that someday I will soar. Lovely, Littlewing...an image of which I can relate and take one step further in my mind. Thanks Patricia |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
When I was a child I had a dream that one day I would fly I did not realize then that dreams drift like the silent breeze the golden seas tranquility on my knees wings wrapped around me im sending a kiss to the inner child; she needs one, sue..xoxo this is a beautfully sad and sadly beautiful image, just what i always am moved by most....pity the poor children that cant even dream |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my, my, littlewing. This gave me goosebumps! But...that's a good thing. My goodness...into my library it goes! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
hee hee..I umm...I...forgot to click the library thingy...geesh..  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
tweets~ this is just too sad...The moment is a fleeting one, as far as dreams go. I admire your short form that says it all! Many hugs for you this morning~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - thank you . . . I know they are for now they are keeping me warm K: isnt it though? Yes . . . thank you Thank you Brad! Raph: I know exactly what you mean thank you xxoo Dixie - lol - yes I do please . . . thank you Kahlil - good point - yes . . . maybe so thank you Margherita: thank you . . . I am trying to gently let them find their way Patricia - you are very welcome Yes . . . cannot wait for the day I will not have to depend on my wings to fly Thank you Michele - thank you and yes you are absolutely right . . . right back atchya thank you xxoo Chris - thank you so much - means a lot coming from you Thanks for the hugs Bluesy - much needed fleeting . . . yes, sadly Thank you guys xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) But at least knowing you feel the wings around you that angels are listening tonight and there must be a way to fly even if not in mortal life! (sigh) You always fly to us here, sweet friend, you are our sweet graceful spirit, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
this is intense, and deep feeling in my bones. you know i'd hug you if i could friend? |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad but beautiful, suz. thank you. Goldenrose. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very poignant. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Noah - yes it is a comfort Gemma - yes I know you would - I would too Phil - thank you again Ericc - you snuck in there Thank you thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 04:23 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Vandana xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes.....sometimes they are for keeping warm... but you always know they are there when you want to feel the tears drying on a fast diving swoop |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri - yes . . . they are thank you for reminding me to be grateful for that xxoo |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I think I know the feeling, and I especially liked the ending. "on my knees wings wrapped around me" Yours truly ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Broken - thank you so much and yes I do believe you know this feeling quite well Thank you for understanding xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse has been very kind to you of late... Well done, Sue... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Karilea - but it isnt my muse exactly . . . I blame Karen and Brian lol giving me homework xxoo |
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