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The Spa of Love
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The Spa of Love |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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The Spa of Love By Larry Chadwick You have cleansed me with the bar of your love, I am completely drenched in your affection. My life scented by the aroma of your beauty, I feel like I have soaked forever in your adoration. The oil of your caring has soothed my every ache, And the soft glow of your content eases my mind. The spa of your emotions fulfills my every need, In you I have discovered what I thought I’d never find. June 11, 2003 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-12-2003 10:52 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Larry... sounds indeed like someone special.. nicely done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - loving write for your mom. I wish mine were still here so that I could write to and for her... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
'scuse me a moment... suthern's gotta sigh at this. *S* In you I have discovered what I thought I’d never find. This is just beautiful, Larry... the type of pampering that refreshes and renews cell deep... and only costs a heart. *S* |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Lovely, Larry. My mom is a blessing, too, but sometimes it is hard to always remember it in day by day life. Thanks for the reminder. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Time out! The "For my mom" was from the template of my previous poem! Oops.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-12-2003 10:57 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cpat, Thanks and you are right.  Bill, Thanks. My apologies about the misunderstanding of this poem. Sorry Bill but it wasn't for my mom. Ruth, Thank you dear girl.  E_C, Egg on my face as this wasn't for my mom. See explanation above. Oops. But you are indeed right. Thanks.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Larry, I was looking everywhere trying to figure out why these people were making references to your Mom!?! I didn't find anything.  I really like this part....I know it, too! In you I have discovered what I thought I’d never find. Hugs to you Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoohoo! wonderful! great write! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... It was definitely worth a return visit... you're awfully cute when you blush! hee hee! *G* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Larry I loved the way you wrote this....fantastic! "You cannot touch love..... but you can feel the sweetness that it pours into everything" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh Larry...I do like this piece!! As a matter of fact..I am putting it into my libary. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the heavenly scent and warm affection in this. Sweet stuff Larry~ |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice,ive enjoyed it. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Larry, this is so, so , so BEAUTIFUL! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very hearfelt and romantic...sometimes we all need a little spa of love ! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ethel, LOL Well right under my name below the title in small print it siad "for my mom" and it was meant for the previous poem I used the template on. Oops! And thank you. Dixie,  And thank you dear girl.Ruth, You're laughing with me, right? Sue, From an original romantic! Cool... Chris, Woohoo! I'm in your library. And thank you sweet friend. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Thank dear friend.Foxyoasis, Well, thank you. And welcome to Passions. Hope you are liking it here. Saunni, Thank you sweetie.  A Romantic Heart, Aw, I couldn't agreek more. And thank you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Smiling here... Where IS this spa?..  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Larry, I must say, I do believe you may have outdone yourself with this deeply romantic write...  Angel blessings to your beautiful union, Linda |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
love it!! screw the spa i need a sauna  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm so glad you fixed it, Larry...because I was going to have to show an  at what I thought I was reading as I went through the responses....Whew!!!! Me so glad you're not THAT kind of young man!!!!!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aw, you are one big teddy bear romantic sweetheart! |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I love this. Nicely written! "Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nan, LOL Thanks. But as I recall... Oh, that's right I forgot. Linda, Aw thank you dear friend. Much appreciated. Ceinwyn, LOL And I'm betting you want more than a weekend! And thanks. Karilea, Sheesh...I never make mitakes!Kacy, Aw thank you sweetie. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
J.K., Thanks it was fun. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Larry, it is so nice to have someone like this in your life. BTW, where is this spa? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Larry: as I was reading the first two threads I was thinking: Goodness, he must have been very close to his mom LOL This is beautiful xxoo |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write (Larry C) I drug my husband in here and made him listen as I read it! I told him that he could take some pointers...(he went outside...haha)  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup those templates can burn ya'! Sorry I can't respond individually but thank you for your lovely responses. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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