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Nature of Reality
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Nature of Reality |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Nature of Reality While substance is a prearranged domain for the mind/soul of conscious The unseen world of spirit is revealed in woven reality precious Truth is to the soul as food is to the body Within the realm of dreams, and infernal powers hardy A realm of will, thought and awareness…abstract ethereal Virtual world, within the inter-changes of perception and the surreal The nature of wisdom and intuition of our physical way Valid physical manifestations, where underlying truth is never changed At any given moment in time, reality is constant and accurate Freewill is something more then mere matter, in our physical planet It is immutable understanding, tangible concepts alive By nature dynamic and defining our quality of life Fundamental nature, internal discernible essence Of the ability or potential for any change and effect Like little feet that take deep root to travel over ground Enflaming graces softly enflame your heart’s seasons abound Deep touches of foam adding knowledge to that commendable state Promising time which stands to see lost kernels of grain Hearts cry in secret passions for deep ornaments of love that surround Where our plain land lies with open hands catching worth circling around Torches of small golden leaves waiting to pollen fragrant trust Dripping down the strong chin of earth’s lively crust Spilling over sweet an ancient vibrant face Going quietly subtle promising long prudence of unfurling fate Intersections of two minds touching balanced song Towards an aisled community through width stretching along Spinning wings, finding a surge that raises inspiration’s voice Moving us towards things we’ve never experienced before Beyond where skin meets with an ocean of grateful prayer Within a pull where spirits sleep in gentle complete care Tender sounds without voice can be audibly breathed Languid pools of human will, brims over and perceives |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now that's deep an incredible write! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is great, as usual..Nothing uncouth from you thus far. I love your style, it's so gracefully put together..  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WHOA! so much to read and ponder in this piece, and I've only a few minutes of PC time today. Suffice it to say, I'll be back to this one later today. WELCOME to Passions!  |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
yea thats really deep and really good... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Many thanks to all of you for not only taking the time to read...as you'll learn, my poems are generally long winded (smile) but also to leave such generous comments. Happy Weekend to you all....Lee J. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your symbols brew a brine of froth on the ocean that you sail, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This reads like a multi-layered casserole, not always easy to separate out all the flavors, not able to identify each thought and the writer's intent...but well worth a second and third read. Complex, but then again? maybe it's just me, and that migraine headache I just fought off left me too tired or dense to unravel all the hidden meanings within this piece. So, I'll probably save it and come back for another visit. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Midnitesun!  ARCTIC WIND |
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