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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-21 10:52 AM

delete me

erase me

pour me down
the drain,

stomp me out
forget my name,

toss me off
your guarded gate,

shred my picture
shatter its frame,

now
wish me away.........
wish me away........
wish me away........

into the cornfields of oblivion
where you send my remains,

now KISS me loverboy,
once again,

i double dare you,

dont abstain,

tell me ,tell me
you know how i'm vain,

confirm to me that
i'm not insane,

that in you
i still live.......

a smoldering flame

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-21-2003 03:57 PM).]

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2003-06-21 10:55 AM

I loved this!

A wonderful read.

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-21 10:56 AM

LOL, love can make you insane, can't it?
Somehow, I doubt he'll be able to toss you so easily.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-06-21 11:14 AM

Michele~
Felt the vent of poetic intent~

I REALLY like this line of thought -

'into the cornfields of oblivion'

VERY creatively original~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-21 01:13 PM

Jesus H:

ok Michele - this this hit home too
I am going to step away from the PC

brilliant brilliant write and
we both know the answer is yes
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-21 02:09 PM

yeah! I feel this!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-21 03:47 PM

yes, my sisters,
glad you can relate!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-06-21 04:22 PM

confirm to me that I'm not insane.

Thankyouverymuchgirlielocks~ ha!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-06-21 05:05 PM

lorigirl,
you got me started last night,with your brutal message for some lucky/unlucky
recipient.......lol

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-07-30 06:00 PM

I Enjoyed this one A lot!-- Emotion-Filled

ARCTIC WIND

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