Open Poetry #27 |
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Hit and Run Roses |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
expectation and reservation shroud the new rose he brings, longing to savor its beauty as it sweetly unfolds, finding myself instead skipping storybook pages, doused in red petals, as they fall to the ground [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-20-2003 02:04 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
expectation and reservation YES the petals fall but the beauty remains lovely Michele xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoy those roses forever long they last... Huggums, EA |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
The first time I got my girlfriend roses, she took a picture of them so that she would always be able to see them. "There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature." |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
The memory of the rose far outlasts its actual beauty. Given from the heart, it lasts forever. Always goes with a little red vino, a box of chocolates, a little lube from the soul and a kiss! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Michele, that bklynboy has got the right idea, doesn't he? LOL A good poem, Michel. I enjoyed it. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for stopping by, yes ethel, bboy is the light at the end of my tunnel sometimes |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This poem was very pretty! and I love roses especially gold ones...and rose petals! it is great to read other love poems and be inspired! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nice poem Michele, and I loved your title too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written,,, oh yeah what a rose mesmerize ![]() A voice of honesty |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Just WUNNERFUL! |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Can't believe I missed this one! Beautiful writing, as always. ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Cool. And softly they fall I am sure. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dried memories can still bleed if you mix them with tears. Beautiful write. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thinking about this one my friend... Expectations and reservations... Would that be the recipe for love? Smiles from TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and feeding me back with your thoughts |
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