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A Girlie Lullaby In The Guise of A Simple Request
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A Girlie Lullaby In The Guise of A Simple Request |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Magic minstrel sing for me, tell me of realities where unrequited love finds happiness; sing it soft convincingly, and shadows of tranquility will hide my empty soul from consciousness. Minstrel thou art thief and king, sing to me of everything I have often dreamt and never had; sing it soft caressingly, until I sleep transparently forgetting other dreams that make me sad. ©2003 by icebox |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Girlie or not a request many would love to have answered |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you Poet Sir..this is lovely.. My sweet Sen-girlie has had insomnia since I met her and I always tell her we are going to have to write her lullabies to give her sweet dreams. She will love this...the kind intention most of all. Thanks for sharing your verse  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"tell me of realities where unrequited love finds happiness;" ...and ....h |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this was a pleasant read..enjoyed  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Sometimes a song does just that. Enjoyed this. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a gift, m'friend. However can I thank you?  I think I'm becoming a groupie!  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
nei, not girlie just simply and purely lovely! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
sing it soft caressingly, until I sleep transparently forgetting other dreams that make me sad. I love this part especially. Thanks, poet Sir.  Hugs  Ethel |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Aenimal ~ Thank you, Sir. I appreciate your opinion. Janet Marie ~ I hope it helps! Thank you for your comments. 1slick_lady ~ Well, you know...pleasant poems are REALLY hard for me to write! Sometimes I feel like an emotional tea bag steeped in the waters of depression. Thank you for telling me you were here. ecrivan ~ I am glad you enjoyed it; thank you for telling me. Martie ~ *smile* Yes, sometimes I lose myself in music. serenity blaze ~ A man who has joyfully given away all he has to give, is as rich as a man can be. I am glad you enjoyed this. Oh...not to worry, I actually have worked as a roadie; I know how to handle groupies....*grinnnn* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Ceinwyn ~ Thank you for your comment. *smile* garysgirl ~ May your dreams bring you joy. Thank you for reading my poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"smacking my head" what IZZIT with me and roadies??? LMAO...oh I do have tales to tell...  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful write... Genuine and interesting, with an old world flavor. TD |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
serenity blaze ~ Well, there are only a few possibilities. Good karma, bad karma...hard to figure. You could just be a weirdo magnet. Although, roadies can be very handy; they can fix almost anything with gaffer's tape and wire. They are usually a good source for ...things. And, of course, they usually still are conscious long after the "stars" have slipped into induced oblivion. So, tell me some tales! *smile* ThisDiamond ~ Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment; I am glad you liked it. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well it does have a familar ring to this girlie~ Although the style suits you well, glad to see you tried this on for size. You are a master of poetic words my friend~ *Simply dashing* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'sing it soft convincingly, and shadows of tranquility will hide my empty soul from consciousness.' Your titles crack me up sometimes. And then your poetry goes somewhere.......else. Enjoyed, as always. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Well, this girlie loved this lullaby request. Sweet dreams. Patricia |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
BluesSerenade ~ Oh my! I have not been called "dashing" in decades! Thank you. *smile* Duncan ~ You caught me; I do have fun with titles. Thank you for reading and for your comment. Patricia ~ I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for taking time to read it and to comment. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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