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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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moonlit sidewalk chemistry the house is creaking, the sink is leaking. cars flow by.. silence interferes with the way we breathe.. i am warmth in winter mixing night between the meaning. covering the moon with my thumb. i lie on wet grass that stains the aura where I have come to be. a cosmic oblivion in which I seek and destroy all that has become bleak and indescribably unsatisfied with me. Swallow words I've shouted to the sky it misunderstands the reasons.. the chemistry.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Swallow words I've shouted to the sky it misunderstands the reasons.. the chemistry.." wow...I know this...excellent write!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kaoru...wow...I'm liking this one..lots. Very cool lines in this. Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
whatever you're doing, stick with it...it works! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I have to say I'm pretty p@*$&#* off that i missed quite a bit of your poetry the first time around. Thankfully Gemma turned me towards you're poetry and I've been digging in the archives. Absolutely amazing writing |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Hey, raph, i was digging in Karous stuff too last night! you just have such style lady. Surreal brilliance. love gem xxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
digging too..look what I found. thats great! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is maybe your best... It's a bit more fleshed out, yanno? ~wranx |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yes...please add me to your ever growing list of fans...my time in here this summer has been limited and I missed much of your work...so I will be doing some late night backtracking... this is an awesome poem of imagery and personification..loved its surreal, abstract essence.Well done poetess!! "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
covering the moon with my thumb. i lie on wet grass that stains the aura where I have come to be. Kaoru, you can add me to that list of fans, too. This is ao beautiful and dreamy.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ditto what everyone else said. Thought: If we are all digging around at night it would be nice if we had a proper chat room to go to..... Anyway, I love how you write. Susan C. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I think I'm going to have to put a new shelf in my library, because I'm certain I'm going to say, someday soon, I knew her when. |
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