Open Poetry #27 |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Opening the gates of yesterday, to see the light fade from my eyes and languish in the dust upon my boots. Clogged dirt, red cacked in the hardness of the earth that carries itself along my body, that no amount of water may ever fully cleanse me. The pale light of the sky, amber trails of solitude that relent to my imagination. Home is far from me once more, the boards of a house, the lawn I must cut. Far from me are the troubles of city things, were upon the only traffic I find are the ants meandering along the path of food. The first star of the eve, and I weep for the next as the cracking sound blazes past my ear. Hours I have not slept, days really, and now I must remember, my place, my purpose. Blood travels strange along a path in the ground like some perverse river, only to be stopped by its own clotting. Another star I see, and I belong to the night, to the missery of gun residue on my face, the sand and sweat through my clothes. Open my eyes and I dream of home, and were did you live? Where did you belong before we became enemies on your ground? Ruthless indignities must surrender a I have my heart to the pain that will never leave of a time past, not forgotten. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, this seemed real!! Very, very good writing, Sir. Hugs to you Ethel |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
this is very heavy,lots of potential for a song |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I can hear a song in this |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Worthy effort and a fine write. Enjoyed the read. |
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