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Linger......(rictameter)
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Linger......(rictameter) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . . . Linger stay close to me let me feel your presence with musky, cologne kisses ~ there your voice a whispered secret always ~ here remain my constant inner thought sweet love, do not depart beg ~ time stand still Linger . . . . Chris Barker June 2002 ~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Chris, this is a superbly romantic write in that format. Well done.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH YES!!! WoooHooo!!! Love this Chris! Wonderful write...a keeper for sure! ~Hugs and miss ya, Teed~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
your voice a whispered secret always ~ here I love that line, and the whole poem too. Maree  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is absolutely beautiful. I love it.... the romanctic poem and the form, too!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Chris, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I long to linger forever in my special loves memory whenever I find her and have her hand always held when she needs someone to wash her tears away! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Nicely written Chris.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"your voice a whispered secret always ~ here remain my constant inner thought" ...love it..and that is one of my favorite pics |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou my dear poet friends! This for some reason touches me as well. I wanted you all to enjoy it. hugs. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Don't you just love it when you love it? I can see why this one "felt right", it is beautiful Chris. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It must be June, the love poems are... [are you ready?...] lingering....  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful write night |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Linger stay close to me let me feel your presence with musky, cologne kisses ~ there your voice a whispered secret always ~ here remain my constant inner thought sweet love, do not depart beg ~ time stand still Linger =================== had to highlight the whole thing because not one beautiful word should be taken from the others.. this is such a lovely, softly sensual write.. absolutely wonderful Poetess Chris. No matter what the differences |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 You are all so kind ~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~ This is so beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm glad I took the time to stop and linger with this lovely rictameter!  Have a wonderful day, Chris! Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Nancylee for the little nudge. Linda & vandana - I'm glad you enjoyed. The summer is calling me and I might not be in Pip as much. Hope you all have a safe & happy summer!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chris: this is lovely although sadI know it well I do and hey! you are good at this (geez I need to brush up here) Soon, Chris, soon xxoo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yes. *S* This one goes straight to my heart with its wistful beauty. *S* Just lovely... and going into my library. *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
littlewing & Ruth, Thankyou both so much for reading and commenting - hugs! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I like it I like it. And the form too, you do it well. Kraw' |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Gosh! I love that picture! always have. Love the write, just beautiful! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very romantic. Love the photo as well. Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Can't tell who ia prettier your picture or the poem. Wonderful write, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all so much. I am very proud to have so many grand poets read and sign my piece. A wonderful beginning to summer's season. Bless you all!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nightshade, This is write is full of love and heartfelt emotions! -- I do enjoy reading these kind of poems. Spoken clearly from the heart ARCTIC WIND |
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