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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-06-19 11:01 AM

hush
listen
to the angel's lullaby
baby
just breathe
let it all cave in
hush
cry
your silent tears
for noone
noone but for you
breathe
let it all release
for noone
noone but for you
hush
let the angel's lullaby
comfort you tonight
let the silence
reassure you
that everything is gonna
be alright
breathe
for noone
noone but for me...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-19-2003 11:18 AM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-06-19 11:07 AM

this is lovely.... a ethereal beauty...
like a whispered wish...
So good to see you back with us

No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2003-06-19 11:09 AM

JM it's always a pleasure when you grace me with such replies thank you *now goes back 2 her groundhog hole

*i'll probably b back when I see my shadow

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-19-2003 11:11 AM).]

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

3 posted 2003-06-19 11:10 AM

I remember feeling this way. Your poem is beautiful. I'm going to send it to a friend of mine who would probably like to read it.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-19 11:12 AM

yer a sweetheart you know that? grins

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2003-06-19 11:16 AM

pisumnux: thank you glad it's worthy enough to share

Raphey: now as for you, you know i'm on a kissey face fettish

btw...breathe

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 2003-06-19 12:35 PM

Reminds me of a folk song I used to sing to my kids....good job

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-06-19 12:45 PM

I loved this, even if I have interpreted it incorrectly, to me it was like having a good cry. Sometimes that is exactly what it takes to get over it and move on. Really nice poem Ceinwyn~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-06-19 01:01 PM

good stuff!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-07-23 07:56 PM

ohhhh i loved this. breathing now.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-07-23 08:02 PM

Very pretty...such a comforting mood to this piece. Enjoyed. TD

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-07-24 05:07 AM

a lullaby sang to soothe a fragile soul
beautiful Kris
xxoo

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-07-24 05:12 AM

Kris..this is simply beautiful. Such a soft and tender write.
Wonderfully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

13 posted 2003-07-24 05:17 AM

good one here Kris...and stay out of that groundhog hole!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-07-24 05:44 AM

glad this one surfaced again...good to read it over

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