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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Spring pours a thesaurus of neverending rain writting on palettes scribbling its rhythms running down window panes, diluted wishes and dreams spirals of interlocking drops captured for now in puddles, along with splashing sparrows and the longing for a goldenkiss, keeping alive these dreams |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, awe inspiring poetry! Very beautiful write.  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written my friend Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
keep em alive its all a pisces can do..silly fishies We are here to laugh at the odds and live our lives so well that Death will tremble to take us. ~ Charles Bukowski |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: diluted wishes and dreams spirals of interlocking drops captured for now in puddles, yes. . . puddles for now nice write xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
along with splashing sparrows and the longing for a goldenkiss, keeping alive these dreams Yes, we are "keeping alive these dreams"... a good write, Michelle. I enjoyed reading.  Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nice little wet and wild inky dream you wrote here. And furthermore, that is such a pretty picture of you Michele. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-19-2003 01:09 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a very very nice! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
writting on palettes scribbling its rhythms running down window panes, reminded me of a time..lol... a time I was crazy perhaps..and could almost see the rain that fell as long passages of poetry arranging and disolving as it formed. I enjoyed... and thanks for bringing that emmory back...if for only a flash. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beauitful images...nice flow to the words...enjoyed.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful, keeping alive these dreams, was an awesome ending....thank you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
what a nice write with a perfect title... In admire... my regards sudhir |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"Spring pours a thesaurus of neverending rain" Just that one startling image would make me glad I read this poem....and for the rest, well, I could pick almost any other pair of lines and say the same thing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... the images in the first verse are striking... and superb. *S* |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Truly enjoyed as usual.....By the way, I like the picture, what a coy, sexy smile! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed your spiral Poem! ARCTIC WIND |
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