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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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My thoughts interrupt my thoughts, they are stumbling across eachother. Like a clumsy pyramid of cheerleaders. I've been written into a room full of doors, staring at a clock with no hands to it's surface. Time is a multitude of sins going around in circles and twisting around the inevitable bloodshed within my head. And I'm real, in motion.. an eclipse above my heart I tear this world up and split it apart into when the clock strikes two. And when tomorrow didn't hold such a grudge against my emotion. Chances are, if I'm so uneven, I'll collapse.. Like a clumsy butterfly with a missing wing. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your title fits the described maladies perfectly...we all have these days... and pray they are only days...not eternities... A butterfly with one wing hits the bullseye. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write, I can relate well to this! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
loved the read, loved the write. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
My thoughts interrupt my thoughts, they are stumbling across eachother. This is why I don't sleep. As for the butterfly with broken wing analogy, there's too much strength emotionally in your writing to go with that. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey girl, i enjoyed this one |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kaoru - this is amazing . . . and trust me I fly on one wing all the time xxoo |
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