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Father's Day Without
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Father's Day Without |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Father’s Day Without By Larry Chadwick For my mom On this first Father’s Day without my dad, I’m reflecting on the good times that we had. But I have someone else that keeps coming to my mind, Mostly I am thinking about my mom whom he left behind. Times are lonely when your dad dies and is finally gone, But I cannot imagine what it must be like for my mom. Sorry mom I understand I cannot fix your heart’s pain, Yet I am here to help you walk that lonely lane. I realize I cannot replace the loss that you endure, So I just want you to know that I love you for sure. I am inspired by your ability to carry on as one, And on this Father’s Day I am proud to be your son. June 11, 2003 If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-12-2003 01:13 AM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very sweet, Larry!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Larry, It's tough when one parent departs and the other is left alone with memories...but such is life, nice poem for a day many take for granted  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-12-2003 12:40 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I hope you sent this to your Mother. Better yet, why not frame it! You words are a genuine heart warmer my dear~ No doubt, you must make your Mama so proud. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Larry, this is a beautiful poem for your mother. I think you should frame it, too. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
~Elizabeth, Thank you. Just doing a little reflecting. Martin, Thank you. Yup, life isn't exactly tidy. But it is manageable. Lori, Hey... It'll arrive on Father's Day. And sorry, it won't be framed. And thank you. Sue, LOL You guys are full of all kinds of suggestions.  And thank you dear.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the gentle thoughts...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Larry, This will mean so much to your mother. Your caring heart is so apparent here in this beautiful piece. Patricia |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
A wonderful, caring poem. Your mom can't feel nearly as alone after reading this! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Larry, when I saw this I expected something else... but your mind is already out caring for others... so just know you've received a Father's Day Hug from a friend. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
James, Thank you kind sir. Thanks Patricia for your kind words. E_C, I'm sure you are right. And thank you. Karilea, Thanks for  ! And for the kind words. back.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Larry- Been there, done that, bought the wardrobe. It really sucks on the first one. I'll be sure to send you happy thoughts with my nightly intentions. This is a terrific write. Day after day I'm more confused, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sorry mom I understand I cannot fix your heart’s pain, Yet I am here to help you walk that lonely lane. I realize I cannot replace the loss that you endure, So I just want you to know that I love you for sure. I am inspired by your ability to carry on as one, And on this Father’s Day I am proud to be your son. Larry, this is so very special....just precious. Thank you for sharing this part of your heart with us. Hugs to you and your Mom  Ethel |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Larry...What a marvelous poem of love to both your mother and father. Your Mom is very blessed to have a son like you. ***Ivy Rose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful tribute! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Larry - this is beautiful . . . has she seen this? If she has - she must be proud of you xxoo |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
But I have someone else that keeps coming to my mind, Mostly I am thinking about my mom whom he left behind. Goodness, I didn't know anyone felt that way as I did and still do also. All I could and can think about is my mom even though I hurt beyond belief without my dad. You have a wonderful heart. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Such tender thoughts, bring me to tears. Bless you Larry... and happy fathers day~ Love, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Your genious lies behind your pen Larry. That almost made me cry. Such a wonderful son to write such a love-filled poem for your mother! Cheers, Cheers, Cheers! If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
 thanks for expressing your sorrow in such a gentle way |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Larry - You are the ONLY one who can help your mom - For her, his son is everything she's got left of his memory - Share yourself with her, and you'll make her smile... This is a lovely poem, sir - and I wish you joy on this Father's Day, as you embrace your own son - and deal with your own personal loss. You're an amazing man... My most humble respect is yours.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hugs to you and mom, and the whole family on this difficult day. Somehow, I know you'll all focus on love and giving instead of loss. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is just beautiful Larry. What a loving, caring, gentle man you are! Your mother and all of us here at Passions are fortunate to have you in our lives. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I understand and know this loss. This is a most wonderful poem Larry. I bet your Mom will love this. HUGS, Bridgette  PS Happy Father's Day!!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmmm, I too expected something else when I read the title... but anyway, and I hope it's a long while before I have to experience a Fathers' Day without my dad |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Larry How very proud your Mother must be. Your words were so heartfelt and sincere. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
what a sweet man you are...h |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written Larry, I have my Dad, and he lives without his mate, my mother. And on Mother's Day....I feel something of what he feels, of what your mother feels. I know that she loved this poem... It is very nice. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your heart never fails to make me smile Larry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have such a caring and gentle soul Larry.. Always thinking of others... Your mom and we here at Passions are so fortunate to have you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry...this touches a tender place in all of us...thank you for that. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sometimes we get so wrapped up in our own losses we forget how the same loss affects others, also. Obviously, you don't....excellent thoughts, Larry |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
As do I... I can not imagine life without my father, nor can I imagine my mother without her love and joy next to her side. Heartfelt write. Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ringo, Sorry to hear of your loss. And thank you for your kind thoughts. Ethel, You are always so sweet to me. Thank you dear friend. Ivy Rose, Thank you sweet lady. Your kind words are much appreciated. Dixie, Thank you for being so faithful. littlewing, Woohoo! Thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Saunni, I'm so sad to know that you know this feeling from personal experience. Peace and courage to you. Kellie, Thank you dear girl and I hope all is well with you. Timothysangel, There's genius behind my pen? I swear I looked and couldn't find it. You're too kind, thanks.  Martin, Thank you for your thoughtfulness. Nan, I'm not a stutterer bbbbut when you get going... Thank you dear friend. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, How do you know all that? Have you been on your magic carpet again? And when do I get my camel ride? And how come you are such a dear friend? Miss ya'! Chris, I'm not so sure. You sure bless my life dear lady. And thank you. Bridgette, Sorry for your loss too. And thank you for your kindness. Rhonda, Yup, a loooooooooong time. Bless you sweet thing. And thank you for sticking by this old guy. (Okay I couldn't say old fart!) If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, And I hope you had a wonderful day recalling your dad too. And thank you. Helen, Thank you dear lady.  Barry, Thank you for being one who knows and shares. Duncan, You're the man! Nancy Lee, I've been watching you ever since I got here and you too have a tender caring heart. And thank you so much for being my friend and for you kindness. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, Too many of us know, huh? Sad but life. And how proud I am to know you as a friend. Thank you. Michael, To PiPs gentle(man) thank you. NickTofteland, Thank you for your understanding. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WOW! how nice is that to give to your mother. I think she will really like it! That is very Nice of you!  ARCTIC WIND |
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