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Open Poetry #27

In the Event of My Demise

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

0 posted 2003-06-18 06:30 PM

In the event of my demise.
Before I might close my eyes.
Remember what I've said.
Long after I am dead.
Remember that I was always bold.
Remember all that I've told the world.
Remember all the dreams I had.
Remember everything good, and everything bad.
Remember that I wanted to do it all.
Please don't let my memory fall.
I love all who were positive.
and all who gave all that could give.
Please, wipe the tears from your eyes.
Don't cry.
In the event of my demise.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-18 06:39 PM

Reads like a eulogy!
I think we would all like to be remembered
kindly, for not one of us is without short comings. Hopefully they are out numbered by our good deeds, and the love we had to share.

Enjoyed!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-18 06:39 PM

words that we all might express...as a wish.
Hopefully, this won't occur for a very long
time...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-19 03:01 AM

nice flow

D'sWhisper
Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 68
Washington, USA

4 posted 2003-06-19 04:18 AM

I agree...eulogy like. I love the concept for it's close to my fears. Being forgotten...:::shivers::: ~DW~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-19 04:47 AM

Exactly - a eulogy . . . mannn
nice writing - please tell me it
is a write lol
Welcome to PIP!
xxoo

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

6 posted 2003-06-19 02:21 PM

man, of course i wrote it. thanks anyway for your compliment, i think.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-06-19 08:42 PM

You've written what we hope... that we will be remembered, not forgotten... that we will have touched lives and made a difference...

I hope that event is a long LONG time away... for I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. *S*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-24 05:37 PM

poetically Penned

ARCTIC WIND

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