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WindSong
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0 posted 2003-06-18 04:28 PM



I don't remember when I wrote this but it's old I can tell by the ink and stuff...and the fact that I didn't recognize it when I was at work today...so here goes nothin'...
********************~*****************

I look into your eyes
beyond the walls of the present
I see the past, the glowing star
that never was rekindled.

The memories of sparkling eyes,
the light from one smile to the next.
All glowing with happiness.
All full of love and at peace with each other.

I look into your eyes
beyond the darkness of your pain.
I see the light of a new memory.
The memory of new love.

The love of a strong friendship.
The love no other person could offer.
The memory of two people
living a life of one through one another's eyes forever...
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...I didn't already post this did I?
...Obviously in Teen poetry...but I'm hoping here people will reply? I dunno just at try...

[This message has been edited by WindSong (06-18-2003 04:31 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-18 05:24 PM


This poem has potential!   Great job.
WindSong
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2 posted 2003-06-18 09:35 PM


Thanks! Peace!

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

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3 posted 2003-06-19 02:51 AM


very nice, I can relate
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4 posted 2008-02-23 11:20 AM


lovely written Piece!

ARCTIC WIND

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