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Through One Another's Eyes (repost from Teen)
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Through One Another's Eyes (repost from Teen) |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York 
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I don't remember when I wrote this but it's old I can tell by the ink and stuff...and the fact that I didn't recognize it when I was at work today...so here goes nothin'... ********************~***************** I look into your eyes beyond the walls of the present I see the past, the glowing star that never was rekindled. The memories of sparkling eyes, the light from one smile to the next. All glowing with happiness. All full of love and at peace with each other. I look into your eyes beyond the darkness of your pain. I see the light of a new memory. The memory of new love. The love of a strong friendship. The love no other person could offer. The memory of two people living a life of one through one another's eyes forever... *************************** ...I didn't already post this did I? [This message has been edited by WindSong (06-18-2003 04:31 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This poem has potential!  Great job. |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Thanks! Peace! "Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice, I can relate |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lovely written Piece! ARCTIC WIND |
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