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Two Hearts
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Two Hearts |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Two Hearts Ideal terrain for pretenders one heart open the other not so tender A trap for lovers seeking committment one heart human the other quite indifferent. The need for closeness can breed poison in the sterling moment of a liar's coyness A liar's promise forever shifting the open lover's missionary position Two hearts Ideal runways where flighty words land on the senses where heartaches lurk A flight where lovers chase thier dreams above the world of ghostly schemes. The need for loving can shadow time with holy visions in a lonely mind A passing promise of sharing feelings bold hyper pictures for naive greeting. But two hearts together when they finally hit experience forever in a swirling mist. Keep on trying Keep on trying Because anything less leaves love in silence. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the sentiment and contrast of emotions. I especially liked the last line in this. I look for your work ethome, and always, I enjoy it thoroughly..Thanks for the wisdom in your words. |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Very beautiful, I enjoyed his sentiment. .Echo. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Two hearts may differ, but if they can bridge their differences and beat in perfect harmony, it is pure magic! I enjoyed this write and I am always on the look out for your work! WArm hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn good! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The close was magnificent... Anything less leaves love... Awesome! TD |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
You look at love with wide open eyes, and a open heart. I liked the read, thank you. ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous words and images here Eric, very much enjoyed. Take care...Sue I am in motion |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But two hearts together when they finally hit experience forever in a swirling mist. Keep on trying Keep on trying Because anything less leaves love in silence. "  definately, keep trying |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, I'm finding myself looking for your work, too. You're a very good poet, Sir. I really enjoy your work.  Hugs  Ethel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Liked the poem very much, passionate, but true! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Penned ARCTIC WIND |
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