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Leaving Your Side (saying Goodbye)
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Leaving Your Side (saying Goodbye) |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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told you id put up a new poem when i thought of one hope its ok thanks_ ___________________________________________________ All the times I held you In my arms I wondered if you’d ever leave Or if id get to say Goodbye That night you lay crying I held you in my arms As you slept I warmed your soul Wishing that I never left Wishing that Id never died Guess it was me That had to leave Least I got To say goodbye… The angels came And Carried me To my lasting Resting place In the heavens above… [This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-18-2003 09:32 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee: I do hope you are speaking of peace here lol But I do relate to this more than you will ever know xxoo |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
its a poem about a guy not wanting his gf to leave him by dying and he happens to die and he wants to say his last goodbyes before he moves on to the heavens above to be in peace and wait for her to join him my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so sad  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is sad to me, too.  It may be fiction, but it feels real. "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Goodbyes can be hard, but it can be harder when you don't get a chance to say goodbye... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
It is human nature to desire closure... Touching write. Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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