Open Poetry #27 |
What Friendship said |
El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I spent years looking for friendship, But she always seemed to evade me; Once I found her, and spoke to her, And tried to get her to stay— And what did she say? “You cannot persuade me.” Finally I stopped chasing her, And then there came a knock at the door; Friendship stood at my doorstep— Could I dare hope she would stay? And what did she say? “I’m here forevermore.” |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ben: how sweet - yes - yes always when we least expect it always . . . never when we need it beautiful write xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Benjamin, this is so pretty. Sorry I missed it before. I'm glad that I didn't now. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Benjamin, you can't force friendship, but once you have a dear and loving friend, it stays for a lifetime. I enjoyed this very much. It's making me miss my best friend who moved half way across the country. Hugs, Marti |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
And what did she say? “I’m here forevermore.” nice words to hear,,, enjoyed yuor write... A voice of honesty |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ben, I like this. Excellent, the way that you took it from one direction to exactly the opposite...mysteriously good. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just loved the format on this one... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes...interesting how some people click and become close friends...james |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
El C: this has happened to me. It is quite astounding, isn't it? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you never know how the wheel of fortune turns...enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Friendship is a great thing to have for support, but also sometimes, is the complete opposite! ARCTIC WIND |
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