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Open Poetry #27

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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-18 02:13 AM

   Cast into a world he did not know
     Very afraid and all alone
He made a small fire in the middle of a room
    As he sat and wondered what to do

Out of the darkness came a loud cry
      A creature was lurking
        Better run and hide

      Before he could move
    The creature moved forth
     He reached to his side
     And grabbed his sword

    Down went the ceauture
      With a almighty cry
    As he slashed the sword
    At the creature’s heart

   Suddenly the world faded away
And he was back to where he once lay

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ive got abit of writers block so ill give my mind a little time to rest few days anyway when i do come up with a poem ill post it till then my mind needs to rest

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-06-18 04:04 AM

ah, we all get that writer's block...rest awhile, but do come again soon!

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

2 posted 2003-06-18 07:06 AM

This write held my attention
until the beginning of the end.
It's a good one, only the ending
needs a bit of thought.

Glad you posted it! May your block
transform into a creative circle,
never ending!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-06-18 09:02 AM

Hey Lee:

pretty good for writers block . . .

yes the end needs a punch
but I loved the story
had me going there . . .
xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-22 05:44 PM

Chilling Write!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

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