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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-18 01:39 AM


Bright light staring at the blank page.
Echoing my hands, hovering just above
the surface.
Go away, 60 watt, you mock me?!
I see,
so you've got ideas, you say?
Well, tell me now, another way-
to express all of my emotions on just
one single page.

The walls bleed with my repetitive repertoire,
all crumbling down like a mountain,
they suffocate my very exsistance, as if,
I'd never created them in the first place..

My smile sticks to my face and I
have no room inside to repress what I hide
in a desperate need to -

stumble across a
dark room,
and turn on the light.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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1 posted 2003-06-18 01:52 AM


very nice!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-18 04:07 AM


cool lines....good write.
mirror man
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3 posted 2003-06-18 11:38 PM


You're writing very well, I think, personally.  I mean, if this is supposed to be writer's block.  
Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-23 11:12 AM


Enjoyed the write!

ARCTIC WIND

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