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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Underfoot the crunch of shattered illusions keeps steady company Having walked the path this far I know these things are meant to pass Mere droplets in the slow distillation into something beautiful But knowledge of what may come to pass holds little solace in the dull ache of what is |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This poem makes one think. Enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
But knowledge of what may come to pass holds little solace in the dull ache of what is ----------- Oh Aenimal, I can always so relate to your writes. We of little patience... Hugs, Venus |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph sweety . . . if I could erase that ache I would hugs to you you know where I be and tomorrow? just may bring you solace but I do know that NOW just is not . . . this aches Im sorry xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-17-2003 11:35 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I'm with ya' |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"But knowledge of what may come to pass holds little solace in the dull ache of what is" writing of my heart again are ya?...but that's ok...i keep a special place in it... for you...h |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Simple. True. Thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you loner Thanks venus good to see you back havent seen u in awhile Tomorrow Sue..tomorrow brings more...this..whatever the..this is Thank kahlil appreciate it H you're the best hugs Thank you for stopping by ice |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! This hurts!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes but at least we have our friends you do . . . xxoo and this? I have no idea what "this" is just wish it would have its way with me and leave xxoo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aenimal~ Compelling draw into your thoughts~ Poignantly felt~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mere droplets in the slow distillation into something beautiful Raphey, I wish that I had the power to take your "this" away and replace it with THIS "something beautiful". I would, you know, if I could...... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mere droplets in the slow distillation into something beautiful Nice~ Life is what it is eh! Wonderful way you have, however dark it remains. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Raph, you have a way of getting right down to the ground level, yet always let the reader walk away lifted up in thought. I love your intensity, the way you breathe Life deeply. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss you....  L~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
But knowledge of what may come to pass holds little solace in the dull ache of what is very true, very right on target.... yes, raf, supposedly time heals. but when the time is now, thats NOT much of a consolation prize, at times is it? feel the sunshine in the rain, what else could i say? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent point Raph, yes...sometimes it is difficult to see the good of what is to come when the roof is leaking and ready to cave in... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks kris hugs Dix don't they all pretty much grin Sue have it's way with you..mine does all the time..i walk bowlegged because of it..nevermind thanks Marge Hey Ethel i wish you did too grins..and yes i know you would such a wonderful woman Blues I tld you one day I'll step out of the darkness and shock the lot of you..grin Kacy if i have a way of getting to ground level it's because i'm pinned to the floor lol ooh sounds like a write Hugs L glad to see you're back..and front..now to see your words Mish I don't know what to say..you know how it is..i see glimpses of the light or I wouldnt still trudge on the way i do.. Barry caving in is exactly how it feels thanks for putting it words..peace to you thanks vandana |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Solace is the freedom to write poems like this to which many can relate ... little sparkles of hope always ARE in the NOW and they carry us on ... Bravo, come sempre. E' ORA che crei il tuo futuro....il dolore di ora ti farà riconoscere e vivere più intensamente la gioia di domani. Dipende molto da noi. Abbracci. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok I just saw that comment up there and God it made me laugh I need psychological help . . . |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Mere droplets in the slow distillation into something beautiful Are we nearly theeeeere yet? i'm impatiently being patient for it to happen.  killer of a write raph. |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
unyielding, and sadly too often too true. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue i know i do thanks gemma...turns out the bloody thing was never plugged in thank you bonfire..tis true.. tis true |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*ducking* |
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