Open Poetry #27 |
the McStyle |
Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
gray skies are better than having no windows it suits my appetite to compose with black and bludgeon with blue there are already enough rainbows in the crayons box one less suitor for the bridal of the white horse keeps the traffic moving and allows me to focus on taming the black stallion it runs me in circles through the revolving door broken glass fractured toes all in a nights work the phone will not ring because Ive silenced the belle I bandage my miscommunications the splinters all the things I love what good can I do other than throw myself at the feet of the guillotine drown myself in a troth with an inscription on the side that says “love” fast, so that you cannot starve me with your unintentional smile unfortunately there is little that I can control of the eulogies I have drafted first with my pen and then with my life time will not refrain from correcting me on my mistakes should they actually occur as poorly as I have conceived no one needs to know that but me [This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-17-2003 11:17 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't always "get it"--but I always enjoy the McStyle. This one had my head rolling over. (It plays "dead" too, apparently.) and I guess nobody needed to know that but me, huh? Enjoyed, Drex. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...i think the clock is ticking... |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
gray skies are better than having no windows I love that sentance if that's what u call it. It's a real optimistic veiw on things. kinda like is the glass half full or half empty. Really awesome I asked God how much he loved me... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting write ARCTIC WIND |
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