Open Poetry #27 |
We Could Share |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“WE COULD SHARE” ~~~~ I wonder why tears fall from one so gentle, how they rush it seems from out of nowhere, perhaps a heart broken that’s not been healed, seems like something that we could share… ~~~~ Bill Charles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBill~ How perfectly beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is beautiful. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a caring and tender heart you have--and you express it so poetically... Gentle hugs for a gentle soul, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that will do it ever time bill........what else could it be |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The wish and hope of a tender soul. Soft as ever. Thanx BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so much and this sentimental touch is bound to bring such comfort and bliss forever to your dream love! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Bill. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There ya go again, BCI... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very tender write Bill... ~Smiles & warm hugs~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is one of your most tender and gentle poems. How often we just need to share our tears, our broken heart with one who understands what we are going through. That is a dream many of us share in...finding someone to be gentle and tender with or someone to be gentle and tender to. Anyway...a superb poem that truly shows your heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Thanks, Bill. But you really don't know what you got yourself into by posing that question to me...Maybe we could share? Holy smokes, could I share some broken heart stuff with you. LOL I guess I have before because I know it's shown up in my verses here. This is wonderful, Bill. Patricia |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
This poem bought tears to my eyes. Great poem Bill. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is such a sweet and tender-hearted poem. Thanks for being you. "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Bill as always a heart moving gem from your hand....beautiful! Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, we could |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done Bill......great searching expression. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Words like a caress that wipe away tears ... so beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC If only broken hearts could open up to share the hurt feelings, then and only then would they heal and the tears would stop. Ariana |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: are you reading my mind again? Oh, do I know this well too well xxoo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely! ARCTIC WIND |
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