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raevynsbreath
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0 posted 2003-06-17 11:32 AM




Blah, blah, blah
Twiddle, twiddle, twiddle
The cow jumps over the moon
The cat plays the fiddle

It's all the same
In this game
Of love that we have found

It starts
Up the charts
And then comes
Crashing down

Ba, ba, ba
Boom,boom,boom
The dog laughs out loud
And the dish runs away with the spoon


an old peom. lol.i must say.i'm thinkin, sixth grade here.
_rae

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1 posted 2003-06-17 12:15 PM


Rae~
You give me *giggles* with this write.

I know just how this finger-tipping though thoughts catches me often unprepared for the results~

Thank you~
~*Marge*~

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Laqe
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since 2003-06-15
Posts 72
Michigan, US
2 posted 2003-06-17 04:59 PM


I remember this one!!!
How cute.. I love you, baybee!

.Echo.

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-10 06:24 PM


LOL this is very Cute
Thanks for the good
read that i have
read right now

  

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