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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-06-17 07:38 AM


time reveals worth

of
days slow
days fast

of a love that

subsists

in
memories

*!*

© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-17 07:39 AM


ah... now we are looking at concise word use and the emotion beinf conveyed with a distilled form...

you did it well S.....

I enjoyed.

zenny
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2 posted 2003-06-17 07:41 AM


i don't have words to descibe... i just love it.. *goes and read it again*
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3 posted 2003-06-17 08:07 AM


Sudhir,
Well done my friend.

Nan
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4 posted 2003-06-17 08:30 AM


Time does have a way of showing us the value of perspective... Nicely penned, Sudhir...
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5 posted 2003-06-17 09:37 AM



Excellent my smilin' friend !!
hugs, Chris

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6 posted 2003-06-17 11:37 AM


very true
*s
M

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7 posted 2003-06-17 11:44 AM


Time reveals all...

Warm hugs,
EA


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8 posted 2003-06-17 11:45 AM


Wonderful Sudhir!
~smiles & hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2003-06-17 02:01 PM


It is great to read one of your poems again, Sudhir, and this one is truly excellent. Memories really are treasures, aren't they?

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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10 posted 2003-06-17 04:28 PM


Enjoyed...James
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11 posted 2003-06-17 04:46 PM


the only time is now
thanks for the reminders

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12 posted 2003-06-17 10:27 PM




(sigh) Oh Sudhir, this is beautiful, sweet friend, time truly makes many things possible and also can play cruel tricks sometimes nevertheless it is a necessity! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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13 posted 2003-06-18 12:17 PM


Sudhir, this is beautiful  
Hugs  
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-06-18 12:26 PM


and the emphasis on "subsists"
---------------
subsist

\Sub*sist"\, v. t. To support with provisions; to feed; to maintain; as, to subsist one's family.

He laid waste the adjacent country in order to render it more difficult for the enemy to subsist their army. --Robertson.


Source: Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary, © 1996, 1998 MICRA, Inc.

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In keeping with the concise manner of this piece? Me likes.


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15 posted 2003-06-18 04:26 AM


yes! good write!
Sudhir Iyer
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16 posted 2003-06-18 08:25 AM


Thank you all very much, my dear friends... for coming by to read this little scribble...

Regards,
Sudhir

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17 posted 2003-06-18 10:24 AM


Sudhir:

this "little scribble"
has touched me deep
thank you \is my life
xxoo

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18 posted 2003-06-18 12:30 PM


So very true... so incredibly beautiful. *S*
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19 posted 2003-06-18 08:27 PM


Sudhir,  I must say that your little
scribble carries a lot of weight within
the small space occupied.... It is all
about perspectives and how we use what
we have..

Sudhir Iyer
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20 posted 2003-06-19 07:02 AM


My dear friends, thank you so very much...

regards
sudhir

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21 posted 2008-02-23 11:56 AM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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