Open Poetry #27 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium ![]() |
time reveals worth of days slow days fast of a love that subsists in memories *!* |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... now we are looking at concise word use and the emotion beinf conveyed with a distilled form... you did it well S..... I enjoyed. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
i don't have words to descibe... i just love it.. *goes and read it again* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well done my friend. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Time does have a way of showing us the value of perspective... Nicely penned, Sudhir... ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent my smilin' friend !! hugs, Chris |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very true *s M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Time reveals all... ![]() Warm hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Sudhir! ~smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It is great to read one of your poems again, Sudhir, and this one is truly excellent. Memories really are treasures, aren't they? ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the only time is now thanks for the reminders |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Sudhir, this is beautiful, sweet friend, time truly makes many things possible and also can play cruel tricks sometimes nevertheless it is a necessity! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sudhir, this is beautiful ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and the emphasis on "subsists" --------------- subsist \Sub*sist"\, v. t. To support with provisions; to feed; to maintain; as, to subsist one's family. He laid waste the adjacent country in order to render it more difficult for the enemy to subsist their army. --Robertson. Source: Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary, © 1996, 1998 MICRA, Inc. --------------- In keeping with the concise manner of this piece? Me likes. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! good write! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all very much, my dear friends... ![]() Regards, Sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir: this "little scribble" has touched me deep thank you \is my life xxoo |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So very true... so incredibly beautiful. *S* |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sudhir, I must say that your little scribble carries a lot of weight within the small space occupied.... It is all about perspectives and how we use what we have.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My dear friends, thank you so very much... ![]() regards sudhir |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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