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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Gentle breeze come unto me wash away sin beneath my feet serpent, coiled hiss and sneer spitting venom I fear the twist the turn of fate wait! I am afraid . . . |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
ohh...to be able to make fate wait...or to change it altogether. yeah, that's the ticket. enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such power and rhythm in this short piece .... the invoking is so strong. May the breeze take away all fear! This feeling of sin which is so rooted, is frightening. YOUR fate is LOVE. Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes i know this feeling sue, i throw myself into the ocean for her cleansing fearing i am forever soiled at times..(well my spin on this anyhow) whats l0.......any pearl jam reference? or just over my head [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-17-2003 07:22 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... and the fear...I think something we all must deal with in our own way. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely penned... the fear is evident so clearly regards sudhir |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Great pace and style. But i am not sure i believe you are affraid, not you sue. Thanks for the words and visions. goldenrose. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Don't be afraid..mama say it's gonna be alright.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
littlewing, your writing hits home more often than not. Excellent. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think it's fear that keeps us feeling... *s M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sending you lots of love so there is no room for fear!  You certainly can pack a poetic punch! It just goes to show that less is sometimes more! Huggums, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write here Sue!! Much enjoyed the read... ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) I think in times like these we are all asking for some rejuvenation and some building of hope within, the only problem is those don't understand how patience helps and you keep crossing that line! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! me too! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh Littlewing, I feel your fear...it comes from the unknown. Sometimes I wish I had a crystal ball, but then again, no. To know the ending of my story...not yet. CPAT is right, we must find our own ways of dealing with fear. I hope you find your way through the fear. Hugs to you. Patricia |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I have that fear at times, too. But the breeze is stronger than you may think... ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Fear not, little one! 'Tiz unfounded! You've strength beyond your fears, utilize it! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing Interesting, enjoyed the read. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Edder: to make fate wait would be a dream thank you Thank you James Margherita - ohhh I hope my fate is love what a beautiful reply thank you Michele - that cleansing sounds good to me and the 10? Nice take on it . . .but actually it is the tenth card in my Tarot "Wheel of Fortune" Thank you Ron - unfortunately - yes . . . I know no easy way out of this life for sure thank you Thank you Sudhir Phil - you are so sweet as you see me so strong - why dont I see that? Thank you Raph - mama says, mama says . . . thanks sweety - as long as you are by my side - I fear not Thank you Chris - am glad it does Maureen - God yes - sometimes wouldnt you like to just turn it off though? Linda: lol huggums - thank you so much I need all the help I can get Thank you Nancy - truly Noah - you got it right there - crossing the line and patience . . . thank you Dixie - lol - I know . . . thank you Patricia - you are exactly right - the unknown - I am a Cap so see I always had a plan . . . thank you El - so sweet thank you - I sure hope so Jill - thank you - I stand a test of time Thank you Sy Thanks guys xxoo |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I stopped fearing the turn of the next card a long time ago. I wish I could explain why -- but it would be like trying to tell you what peanut butter tastes like. I have the distinct feeling that you're up to whatever the universe has in store. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
As the season grows older, like leaves from the willow, fear is stripped. A beauty! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write here,,,, A voice of honesty |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are so vivacious tweets, it's become your trademark and what I love about your writing. We wouldn't be human if we had no fear, of course I understand what you're saying here. (sorry to be so late with my reply, I knew you had a poem here somewhere but as I was scrolling from top to bottom then back up again...I couldn't see it for the life of me) Wake up Bluesy! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I find myself searching for your poems. And again those "simple" words, love your style of writing. I think we're all afraid, sometimes. Favourite Hendrix song? If I may ask.. Yours truly ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LR: thanks for the vote of confidence and yes what doies peanut butter taste like? LMA - that question needs to go into Philosophy lol thank you Thank you Ed - as you do know this story quite well - you tell it better than I Thank you Thank you Q! Thanks Bluesy - is ok - we find each other in here - and yes - the fear of change - (like my life isnt like the quickly flipping pages of a book) Hey you just gave me an idea! Thanks tweets xxoo Thanks Vandana! Yes Broken I agree - fear Oh if I could squash it with my fist Ohh your treading thin ice with that question: Ok umm . . ."littlewing" heheh "A merman I should be - 1984" (awesome) "Hey Joe" - like the simplicity of it all "Hear My Train A Comin" (acoustic when he is sitting on a stool with his trademark hat with the rings on it) "Born Under A Bad Sign" ( just amazing Blues) "Sweet Angel" ( oh , maybe my fav with littlewing) I love angels especially Jimi's angels "May This Be Love" (ohh the waterfalll . . .) "Manic Depression" (the way he describes music here) "Little Miss Lover" ( Mitch just wails on the drums here) "Bold As Love" ( the colors of the soul) "Castles Made of Sand" "The Wind Cries Mary" is that sufficient? lol Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-20-2003 11:01 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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JDWolf III New Member Posts 5 |
Hey little wing!! It's wolfy! Great one! |
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