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Open Poetry #27

schleestack caverns (a heart filled choir)

Drexler_McStyles
Member

since 2002-11-18

Posts 195
Venice, Ca

0 posted 2003-06-17 01:46 AM

a love story

me ans Mrs Barbarella
were riding on the bus
when I noticed a button
had come unperplussed
so I pulled at her chest
and played with the bust

but the bus driver
wasnt gonna have any of that
he pulled to the left
and pet the silly little cat
it went totally wild
right where it sat

soon the workers
set down their hoe's
and all waited in line
like a row of dominoes
forgetting the incidentals
like keeping on their clothes

I could continue on
in this arbitrary fashion
but what about the dreamers
whose hopes I am a dashin?
Isnt this kind of filth
long out of fashion?

Stevie

Casey
or
Bust!!

[This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-17-2003 02:08 AM).]

CaseyLeigh
Junior Member

since 2003-05-15

Posts 48

1 posted 2003-06-17 01:48 AM

this...is an example of bad poetry. stop while you're still ahead.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-17 01:51 AM

kinda cute

Drexler_McStyles
Member

since 2002-11-18

Posts 195
Venice, Ca

3 posted 2003-06-17 02:07 AM

by gods!! my cockroaches mustve typed this while I was wiping up the beer I spilled on my bible!!
truly, I can write worse than this, wait until the next one

Steven

Casey
or
Bust!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-06 06:23 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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