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I Sometimes Wonder
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I Sometimes Wonder |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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I Sometimes Wonder I sometimes wonder… If you could see me Heart to heart, Would you? If I could I would give you a new sunset and rest your weary head on my lap Then under the stars In the evening breeze I would sing Moon River No doors No windows Just heaven And you and me BloomingRose [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (06-16-2003 08:30 PM).] |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
Sounds lovely! .Echo. [This message has been edited by Laqe (06-16-2003 08:38 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most tender expression of love. Nicely said.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, I wish I could sing just that samne way in a way I could open the heavens agape and unfurl the blue from within the gray! (kiss on cheek) I just love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tender write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I sometimes wonder why we don't see more of you! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
No doors, no windows, oh gosh! This is really lovely BloomingRose~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful thoughts... M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautiful, as always, Deb. I love this one.Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
BEAUTIFUL!! Love this  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Beautifully written!  |
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