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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-16 12:50 PM


Remaining

you etched me
like blowing sand
tattooing in
your silence
unknown scratches deep
remaining
when you
had gone



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-16 01:01 PM


. . . and the heart continues to
bleed long after the wound has closed . . .

Helen - you have no idea - well yes - you do
This is short and to the punch and it hurts
xxoo

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
2 posted 2003-06-16 04:45 PM


Which will heal in time and space...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-17 03:50 AM


sigh
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-06-18 11:30 AM


Hard to shake it off sometimes,
still,  a beautiful sand cast Helen.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-22 07:18 PM


you etched me
like blowing sand.."

Very Powerful words in this piece!

Beautifully penned ..

ARCTIC WIND

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