Open Poetry #27 |
Remaining |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Remaining you etched me like blowing sand tattooing in your silence unknown scratches deep remaining when you had gone |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . and the heart continues to bleed long after the wound has closed . . . Helen - you have no idea - well yes - you do This is short and to the punch and it hurts xxoo |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Which will heal in time and space... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hard to shake it off sometimes, still, a beautiful sand cast Helen. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
you etched me like blowing sand.." Very Powerful words in this piece! Beautifully penned .. ARCTIC WIND |
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