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Night Wear
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Night Wear |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Night Wear night holds a fragrance so appealing where the moon glows brighter than a wick playing a melody in rain that only demands touch in sheets to cool and warm there was a time when I could reach and feel the comfort now my fingers entwine a mystery where words alone align me showing I don’t wear darkness well |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
maybe not, but you are right at home in clothe of poetess. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, But you will again some day... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was wonderfully written. One day the happiness will return. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"now my fingers entwine a mystery where words alone align me showing I don’t wear darkness well" Not wishing to be contentious with a lady, but....I have a feeling you may be laboring under a serious misapprehension.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
I love the way this poem is worded.. Very nice. .Echo. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
night holds a fragrance so appealing where the moon glows brighter than a wick playing a melody in rain Helen, this is so pretty, even though the other part is very sad. Hugs to you, Lady  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-16-2003 06:10 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...this is stunning. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nor I...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: I have a love/hate relationship with it xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have penned this beautifully Helen.. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Beautifully Penned ARCTIC WIND |
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