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We can work it out
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We can work it out |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Facing you is my fear There is no simpler way to say it Foreseeing all my pieces retrieved fall effortlessly to your crumble of my voice You never hear me in my head Convincing myself this is ok I loved you without even ~thinking~ You were never my burden in spite of it all Would have oh would have doesn't it sound pretty lazy Grace me with yourself no more I did all the things to see it your way Paul echoed as I wrote falling words knowing the end writing a letter I've never sent knowing you would remain selfish and unchanged . Instant karma's gonna get you. [This message has been edited by gemjop (08-01-2003 06:29 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I like you much better than Paul..he always comes off as such a tool..and yes i should be asleep but it's not sticking.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oi! remember, get some sleep, cos u cant die on me. who will i take the mickey out of? i remembered a question i had to ask, remind me next time. its not interesting, i just cant work it out. i'm contemplating some more fooooood |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very intense write ... even though you fear facing him, the title promises well, so you might give him a chance! Love, Margherita  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
i don't have the slightest clue what either one of you are talking about.  on other note, I enjoyed your poem...very much so..insanity is not a crime |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem.. This is intense, I agree. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Life is very short, and there's no tiiiime for fussing and fighting . . . this played while I read I heard this through your words, Gem I know . . . xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemmagirl  A very good write, as always. Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I was going to highlight a couple stanzas that hit me hardest, but then I read it again, and I realised that I couldn't because then I'd have to highlight the entire poem. Beautiful, yet aching write. *hugs* |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nice writing Gem....thank you for the words... Goldenrose. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
LIke this...James |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Another great poem, Gemma... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh yes, those fears ... I know them oh so well. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
What this write is about is a *very* painful place to be. It's a process. Takes time, and hurts *alot.* This is when you need your friends, because it's like a grieving the loss of blood relatives. Here's hoping you recover from this intact, and not a long process. Cover yourself with people that love you!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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