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Open Poetry #27

Lies

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-01 02:16 PM

You promise


   promise

confusion and
wash my
tomorrows
from my skin.

so I can't
remember
the ringing
in my ears

you're screaming

    screaming

one heart
broken
no words
unspoken

i prefer
lies.

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

1 posted 2003-08-01 03:02 PM

Cool!! Very "Hip" and "Groovy"!!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-01 04:17 PM

yep, so did I...until the truth had to come out and then I kicked my own butt for pretending..

Excellent writing.

Susan C.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-08-02 10:51 AM

Whoa....this really grabs the reader!
Eric

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