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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-01 02:16 PM


You promise
  

   promise

confusion and
wash my
tomorrows
from my skin.

so I can't
remember
the ringing
in my ears


you're screaming

    screaming

one heart
broken
no words
unspoken

i prefer
lies.

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Poe_Pot_Pie
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1 posted 2003-08-01 03:02 PM


Cool!! Very "Hip" and "Groovy"!!
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-08-01 04:17 PM


yep, so did I...until the truth had to come out and then I kicked my own butt for pretending..

Excellent writing.

Susan C.

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-08-02 10:51 AM


Whoa....this really grabs the reader!
Eric

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