Open Poetry #27 |
Witchsong--part I (for Nightshade, and in honor of Lammas) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and plant one foot upon the earth the other will be washed by tide as fire plays the dance of mirth. Stars will gather in my hair lightning loosed by chant of tongue gather herb in fold of skirt quickly while this day is young. I free the night from heaven's rule. I greet the golden orb. Walk with me into the wood I tell will ye tales of yore. We remember ways of seed-- here there is no finger's blame-- the only path beneath the feet. To stray is but a following-- shadows stroll behind a lead-- I caution you, don't follow me. But I pray you'll meet me there." for truth is something you must find... so meet me in the forest--deep-- there you'll find a gasp of sky once shaded by the branch of oaks-- two which cradled witches souls graves of sister sacrifice memorial to burning times. Keep this vow of witch's rede: "As ye harm none, do what thou wilt" remembering that will is free... Gather berries on the way, herbs and flowers for the feast. Meet me at the opening in the center of the wood. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...saved! Exquisite in form and content! Loved it, Dear Lady! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity AM or PM either will do and I will meet you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gather berries on the way, herbs and flowers for the feast. Meet me at the opening in the center of the wood. Smiling.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Okay I will meet you...but I am bringing coffee and chocolate!!! I love it when you have stars in your hair! Susan |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karen . . . I caution you, don't follow me. But I pray you'll meet me there." resonating like fine music throughout these walls xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh and I shall meet ye there! As this is but another turning point in the golden haze of the year. Blessed be. Love ya lady!~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...I love the picture this paints in my head... "I will clothe myself in sky and plant one foot upon the earth the other will be washed by tide as fire plays the dance of mirth. Stars will gather in my hair lightning loosed by chant of tongue gather herb in fold of skirt" and this... "so meet me in the forest--deep-- there you'll find a gasp of sky once shaded by the branch of oaks-- two which cradled witches souls graves of sister sacrifice memorial to burning times." and, of course, this... "Gather berries on the way, herbs and flowers for the feast. Meet me at the opening in the center of the wood." It's a date! This is wonderful, Karen...a song, indeed. Smiling at you... Love ya, witchy woman. "My friends are my estate." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gather berries on the way, herbs and flowers for the feast. Meet me at the opening in the center of the wood. I'm on my way!! Wait for me serenity! Thankyou, thankyou for this! hugs, Chris |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"I caution you, don't follow me. But I pray you'll meet me there." This is another beauty m'witch. You're so very good at this. ~yeti |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I will clothe myself in sky and plant one foot upon the earth the other will be washed by tide as fire plays the dance of mirth. Stars will gather in my hair lightning loosed by chant of tongue gather herb in fold of skirt quickly while this day is young. I free the night from heaven's rule. I greet the golden orb. Walk with me into the wood I tell will ye tales of yore. ============================= Here is parting of the ways for truth is something you must find... so meet me in the forest--deep-- there you'll find a gasp of sky once shaded by the branch of oaks-- two which cradled witches souls graves of sister sacrifice memorial to burning times. =============================== Nothing touches you when you write like this... I do so love when you candle dance baby... The imagery in this alone is worth poetic gold... high inspire me lovely good witch.. Glenda has got nothing on you when you braid your hair with stars. and ya know what the best thing is.... "Part 1" means there will be MORE. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks good people, (and Chris, YES, I'm getting to the point of it, soon. ) Wanted to pop in and say thanks for reading tho. And I don't want to flood the forum, but there is more to the legend, and I hated to just RUN through it...but perhaps part III will be tweaked to my satisfaction by um, TODAY? shrug. I never know. Hugs all. Happy Lammas to you. Now go feast. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...you have a line behind you, not following, just wanting to meet you in the glen. I'm one of them. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
meeting you..yes my middle name is there this is YOU focused I can see you an ocean wave among forest flickersun rising and falling with gaiety lit by him not by her holding the dress up to carry the harvest |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I love it when you tell these. This is just wonderful writing.....simply beautiful. :heart; Hugs Ethel Now I need to go find parts II and III |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
On my little tippie toes, off to meet you there and I've got my little basket for gathering along the way.) Oh mercy me this is scrumptious - you are SO good at this, makes me darn proud to know that I know you |
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